看图作文你别怕

要写好看图作文，首先得学会看图抓主题，根据图片内容确定好题材与体裁——写人或写景，说明或叙事，书信、日记或是其他应用文体。其次就要抓要点，仔细观察每一幅图，结合图片中传达的信息，将自己熟悉的结构与词汇列出来，不要漏掉任何一个重点，同时要把握好“不求难、不求异、唯求准”的原则。第三，就是要把要点连成篇，在这一环节一定要注意关键词与过渡句的衔接以及时态运用的准确，文章要前后照应，行文流畅。最后一步，一定不要忘了检查。除了句子、词汇、时态的准确无误，也不要忘了注意标点是否有遗漏与错误哟！讲了这么多，我们来看看下面的例文消化消化吧！

〖情景实况〗

根据右边四幅漫画内容写一篇100字左右的短文。要求短文内容与图片相符，语句通顺连贯。

〖现场过招〗

One day a boy was in his way to home (1) when he came cross (2) a bridge. He thought the bridge was too dangerous of (3) him to cross. But he had no other way to go home but cross (4) the bridge. Then he was afraid and carefully (5) to cross the bridge. Walking to the middle of the bridge, he falled (6) off the bridge into the water. He cried "Help! Help!" Unfortunate (7) there was no one around. After sometime (8), he tried to get up himself. The river was so shallow.
How funny it was!

名师总评

习作者能围绕这四幅图，连贯通顺地表达了图画内容，要点齐全，句子结构基本正确。但有的地方用词不当，因此在这方面还要下功夫。

〖精讲点拨〗
具体修改如下：

(1) “在去……的路上”应为"on one's way to" 固定结构，介词in改为on。 在这一结构中，home是副词，所以介词to去掉。
(2) cross是动词，这儿应该用介词 across。
(3) 动词不定式的复合结构可用介词for或of，如果是形容词修饰物时，要用介词for。
(4) cross前加不定式符号to。
(5) 并列连词and连接的两部分是系动词was的表语，所以副词carefully应改为形容词careful。
(6) fall是不规则动词，其过去式是fell。
(7) 这儿要用副词unfortunately修饰全句。
(8) sometime是副词或形容词，不作介词宾语，表示一些时间时要用some time。

〖存盘备用〗

One day a boy was on his way home when he came across a bridge. He thought the bridge was too dangerous for him to cross.

But he had no other way to go home but to cross the bridge. Then he was afraid and careful to cross the bridge. Walking to

the middle of the bridge, he fell off the bridge into the water. He cried "Help! Help!" Unfortunately there was no one around.

After some time, he tried to get up himself. The river was so shallow.
How funny it was!