| ，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。 Dear Bob, Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you. I have found an apartment on Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you. Best wishes ! Yours, Li Hua 满分理由 本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。 Dear Bob, How are you these days? I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you. Yours, (责任编辑：英语作文网) |