作者：谢娜 高中二年级
Today is Sunday.It is fine and warm.The sky is very clear and blue.My classmates and I are very happy because we are going out for a picnic at Nanshan Hill.We are going there by bike.We have fruit ,eggs,meat,vegetables,knives and some other things with us.

About one hour and a half later ,we come to  a nice place at th efoot of the hill.There are many beautiful flowers and green trees.Birds are singing sweet songs.How pleased we are! Then we are busy with the picnic,some of us are carrying water ,some are cutting the meat and vegetables and cooking,others are sitting on the grass and waiting for a nice lunch.At about 12 o'clock,our lunch is ready.We all sit around on the grass,singing,talking and dringking.
What a nice time we are having!
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